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Timeless

The relentless surf
                Kissing the shore yet again
                Timeless symphony

oceanhaiku

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Warren Doll

Date: 2/17/2019 11:59:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in your haiku, Barbara. Best Wishes~ Warren

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/4/2019 8:27:00 PM

Perfectly penned, Barbara. Wonderful! :) gw

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2019 10:05:00 AM

How about trying a rispetto for my contest, Barbara? I know you've been busy for a while, but quite a few of us are delighted you've returned to share words. Best wishes, carolyn

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/1/2019 2:28:00 PM

done! Thank You...

Jack Horne

Date: 1/31/2019 10:30:00 AM

ahhhh, love this beautiful haiku - great to hear from you, Barbara

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/29/2019 9:43:00 PM

Lovely, Barbara.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2019 6:07:00 PM

Time and tide are two things we can always count on and you expressed your thoughts beautifully in this haiku, LNC. It's nice to see you here. Maybe one day we can catch up. Love, carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/29/2019 5:12:00 PM

Hi Barbara, it's been a long time and still your poetry is muse worthy to say the least. Beautiful analogy and I can put myself in the middle of that orchestra. One never forgets its sight and sound.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/29/2019 5:52:00 PM

thank you! will be around a bit more I hope. Barbara

Timeless

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