Get Your Premium Membership

Time Warp

I lay in the bath, scented candles gently waft
tantalising and teasing as the hot water brushes
my skin setting it tingling. I stir my legs and
hands creating rippling waves that set me afire.

I see you approaching through the billowy steam
and hold out my arms in welcome. You tease as
slowly you strip naked giving an odd tantalising
wiggle then lean over and kiss me passionately.

You slide into the bath with me water lapping
over the edge. Our limbs tangle as our lips
meet in hot lingering kisses and we slowly
sink under the surface entwined together. 

Gasping I come up and stare around baffled
realising I am on my own, that I had slid under.
Slowly, sadly I realise it was only a dream, a
beautiful moment suspended in another time.
The veils had parted allowing us to love briefly
once more until we are, at last reunited by death.

written 1/11/2015

contest Hotsy totsy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/11/2015 5:35:00 AM
My eyes became wider as I read through your poem that I found full of suspense. Julia, :)
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/11/2015 5:46:00 AM
lol ty thought you might enjoy it Julia hugs
Date: 1/25/2015 12:19:00 AM
I very much enjoyed reading this poem. I felt as if i was peering through the warm steam...very atmospheric! :) john.
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/26/2015 3:13:00 AM
ty John so pleased you enjoyed it hugs
Date: 1/20/2015 4:13:00 AM
Wholly Moly, girl... Fifty shades of Shadow!!!.. Very sensual.... Hugs, dear friend.. Arlene
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/20/2015 4:42:00 PM
shucks lol ty Arlene hugs
Date: 1/15/2015 10:58:00 PM
gosh, what an intimate look at what could be called a supernatural encounter. It was very romantic like that Ghost movie that starred Demi Moore!!
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/16/2015 8:04:00 PM
ty Andrea hugs
Date: 1/15/2015 6:28:00 PM
A touching write, exposing your deepest emotions. It is a brave important write, a fav for me!
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/16/2015 8:04:00 PM
ty dear friend hugs
Date: 1/13/2015 10:10:00 PM
I was transfixed by this beautiful poem.
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/16/2015 8:03:00 PM
ty ML hugs
Date: 1/12/2015 11:48:00 AM
A twist in the end a jerk. An wow write."beautiful moment suspended in another time" It always happens isn't it Shadow?>>>RAJAT
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/16/2015 8:03:00 PM
ty Rajat hugs

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry