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Tom Woody's Starman Contest 22 Nov 24
My omnipresent spirit observes man's zonal realms In star-studded cast of aureoles...a diverse culture in motion, Which alights into Borealis songs, their haunting lore, their generational rites And through sacred Mystery , I connect with their melting pot of eras Designed by one Galactic handiwork-- moons, stars planets circling around Milky Way, ever vibrant... And my light pulses with them, my light pulses. Then to bestow a natural pace of night and day, Season upon season, I see myself as one With creation reaching ---out for God's grace. And through centuries before Genesis, I continue whispering to human souls their temporal existence on earth, earth , only a bridge into eternal energy Where peace erases all rancor and greed sown by primitive and urban desires which poison the grid of unity... And I shall will my invisible wings to tap divine power among men likened to holy ascension into one paradise where peace breathes of nothing but hallowed order.

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Date: 11/28/2024 8:33:00 PM
Paradise Regained! You have perfected it, Nette! ~ John Milton (Seriously, this is top-drawer, methinks).
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Date: 11/25/2024 10:08:00 AM
Nette, your poem makes you a consummate environmentalist. The kind of person we need more of. It's not easy for many to see the wisdom of your words! Smiles!
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Date: 11/24/2024 5:49:00 AM
"And I shall will my invisible wings to tap divine power among men likened to holy ascension into one paradise where peace breathes of nothing but hallowed order." Beautiful conclusion to a well written poem. Your poems are never run- of the- mill type. You have a unique style which I greatly appreciate. Congratulations Nette on your win.
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Date: 11/24/2024 5:43:00 AM
I love reading and reciting everyline of this masterpiece dear poet friend and sis. Did it many times. Congratulations for this excellent write and win! Thanks for sharing. Abundant blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 11/24/2024 1:52:00 AM
Your Divine wings work very well here on earth too Nette, :) Congratulations on your win, excellent
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Date: 11/22/2024 10:48:00 AM
Big congrats , Nette. So well done.
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Date: 11/22/2024 9:38:00 AM
Beautifully written Nette in your unique style. Peace and brotherhood. Congrats on your placement
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