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Entered September 8, 2026
In The Contest, “September Challenge: Tritina”
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

Time To Pause

This dreary day, cold winter brings a storm; the snowflakes densely falling, fine and fast, with frenzied pace and not a single pause. Most all who could, stayed home to take a pause. Closings declared, this day's ruled by the storm, and time slows down while snow is falling fast. The snow fluffs its white blanket full and fast, while I sit by my window as I pause- and catch my breath behind this frantic storm. Today's storm, driving fast, grants time to pause.
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Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Back with Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Fine tribute to a storm day. Congrats on your win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 5:45 PM
Thank you, Line. Nice to watch it from inside a cozy, warm home. Hugs, Sandra
Corrigan Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 6:25 AM
Loved the picture you painted of the snow and being at home.
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 5:43 PM
Thank you very much, Mercia! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 4:30 PM
glad you were inside watching the snow, beautifully descriptive many congrats Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 5:43 PM
Yes, watching from inside is nice! Thanks for your lovely comment and congrats, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
Messina Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Wonderful job on this, Sandra. So any great poems in this contest and yours is one of them. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Thank you for another fine contest, Charlie, and for my nice placement. I enjoyed writing a poem for it! Sandra :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Love this, Sandra! A lovely Winter poem! I must try this form too!
Haight Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! It's a nice form to work with. Hugs, Sandra
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