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Written, February 12, 2019
Entered The Contest, "Unlock The Answers With A Tritina"
October, 23, 2023
Sponsor, Dilly Dally

This dreary day, cold winter brings a storm; the snowflakes densely falling, fine and fast, with frenzied pace and not a single pause. Most all who could, stayed home to take a pause. Closings declared, this day's ruled by the storm, and time slows down while snow is falling fast. The snow fluffs its white blanket full and fast, while I sit by my window as I pause- and catch my breath behind this frantic storm. Today's storm, driving fast, grants time to pause.

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Date: 11/17/2023 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 11/15/2023 6:47:00 PM
Back with Congratulations!
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Date: 11/14/2023 11:07:00 AM
I enjoyed the word choices in this one, congratulations on your placement
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Date: 2/25/2019 5:06:00 PM
Fine tribute to a storm day. Congrats on your win, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Line. Nice to watch it from inside a cozy, warm home. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/25/2019 6:25:00 AM
Loved the picture you painted of the snow and being at home.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mercia! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/24/2019 4:30:00 PM
glad you were inside watching the snow, beautifully descriptive many congrats Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:43:00 PM
Yes, watching from inside is nice! Thanks for your lovely comment and congrats, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/24/2019 4:07:00 PM
Wonderful job on this, Sandra. So any great poems in this contest and yours is one of them. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:42:00 PM
Thank you for another fine contest, Charlie, and for my nice placement. I enjoyed writing a poem for it! Sandra :)
Date: 2/12/2019 1:35:00 PM
Love this, Sandra! A lovely Winter poem! I must try this form too!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/14/2019 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! It's a nice form to work with. Hugs, Sandra

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