Time To Go Away

When the river and the rolling stones come to say goodbye.
Tears beneath the wisdom refuse to die.
Happiness and sunshine are all but spent.
The days in the sun, the cold and wet.
 
The river flows the autumn grows the leaves start to die.
The smile leaves my face as the sun leaves the sky.
I look at the horizon, the darkness is due.
No sun in the sky just cold morning new.
 
The cold up on the withered heath, the wind is an icy breath.
The leaves fall to wreath, the darkness is left. 
I look at the sky a mirror of my past.
The sun comes out but never seems to last.
 
I withered away my prospects, my future and my gold.
Drunk away my sorrows and the days of old.
I sleep every night on a sheet of thorns, I can never sleep.
I hope someday time will say it's time to go away.
 
Deep in the chasm lies eternal gold, 
The sun shines bright where the day was once old
Down in the depths, days gone by
I know it is time for me to die
 
Death swoops down like a eagle on its prey
It picks me up and takes me on my way
I know it’s time for me to go
My life’s been lived and now it’s time to go away
 
When the river and the rolling stones come to say goodbye. 
Tears beneath the wisdom refuse to die.
Happiness and sunshine are all but spent.
The days in the sun, the cold and wet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 9/5/2017 11:50:00 AM
Nicely penned piece Costa, this so original in all aspects of writing. Welcome to PS, look forward to read more from you.
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Date: 6/30/2017 10:11:00 AM
This is wonderful. I love your thoughts and apt creativity. Welcome to poetry soup.
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Date: 6/9/2017 10:12:00 AM
What talent you have! Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 6/9/2017 8:32:00 AM
- I think it's a touching story you're writing,Costa - Great written on rhyme - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - // Sun :)
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Costa Owens
Date: 6/10/2017 12:40:00 AM
Thank you, I found it a very meaningful topic.
Date: 6/9/2017 4:30:00 AM
Never worry, no apologies needed :) I just thought I'd give you a little hint. The poem is great!
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Date: 6/9/2017 1:15:00 AM
Hi, what a beautiful Rhyme you have written (Blank Verse does not rhyme) This is a great story you told here.... Welcome to PoetrySoup
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Costa Owens
Date: 6/9/2017 3:21:00 AM
Hi Darren, Thank you very much. I am still at school and I wrote this poem in English so I thought I would share it to see people's views. However I wasn't sure what category of poem it would fall under so I just put blank verse. That my apologies for putting it under the wrong category. :-)
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