Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Time To Go

you struggle to breathe
when dragged back to our realm

your murmur best freed
under loving angel’s sweeping wing

words you utter
still resonate in the night

whisper to my ear

i gasp how i miss you
hello goodbye hello goodbye

each night circling in flight
sweet echo of your playful sigh

i love you you’re beautiful ~
that rhythmic mantra I know to be illusional



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on April 30, 2021 for contest WRITING PROMPT - BREATHE sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE  -  RANKED 3RD

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Constance La France May 11, 2021 at 5:09 PM Line, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully penned and emotional poem, well done, love _Constance

Caren Krutsinger May 4, 2021 at 8:53 AM "words you utter still resonate in the night" This is ethereal and poetic. Line Gauthier May 4, 2021 at 8:47 PM Thank you, Caren ~

Anisha Dutta May 1, 2021 at 10:10 PM Beauty in Pain. I am touched and whelmed. All the best. Line Gauthier May 2, 2021 at 8:51 AM Thanks, Anisha ~

Gary Radice May 1, 2021 at 3:20 AM Line, this is so moving. Poetry comes into its own when expressing our true innermost feelings. Kudos, Line. Line Gauthier May 1, 2021 at 8:27 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Gary. ~

Suzette Richards May 1, 2021 at 1:29 AM It is so delicate. It takes my breath away. Suzette :)) Line Gauthier May 1, 2021 at 8:27 PM What a lovely compliment, thank you so much, Suzette ~