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you struggle to breathe when dragged back to our realm your murmur best freed under loving angel’s sweeping wing words you utter still resonate in the night whisper to my ear i gasp how i miss you hello goodbye hello goodbye each night circling in flight sweet echo of your playful sigh i love you you’re beautiful ~ that rhythmic mantra I know to be illusional AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on April 30, 2021 for contest WRITING PROMPT - BREATHE sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 5/11/2021 5:09:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully penned and emotional poem, well done, love _Constance
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Date: 5/4/2021 8:53:00 AM
"words you utter still resonate in the night" This is ethereal and poetic.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2021 8:47:00 PM
Thank you, Caren ~
Date: 5/1/2021 10:10:00 PM
Beauty in Pain. I am touched and whelmed. All the best.
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Date: 5/2/2021 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Anisha ~
Date: 5/1/2021 3:20:00 AM
Line, this is so moving. Poetry comes into its own when expressing our true innermost feelings. Kudos, Line.
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Date: 5/1/2021 8:27:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Gary. ~
Date: 5/1/2021 1:29:00 AM
It is so delicate. It takes my breath away. Suzette :))
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Date: 5/1/2021 8:27:00 PM
What a lovely compliment, thank you so much, Suzette ~

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