Time To Clean

Some people’s homes are sparkling;
You could eat right off the floor,
With not a speck of dust the mop
Decided to ignore.

Each day they polish, vacuum, scrub;
All surfaces are cleared,
The picture frames and knickknacks
Shiny when they reappeared.

But I do not include myself
Among those folks I know
Whose homes are neat and spotless
With that lemon oil glow.

Yet every now and then a voice
Within me starts to nudge,
Reminding me it’s time to clean,
A job I do begrudge.

So now today my windows gleam,
The tabletops as well
And if you came to visit,
You’d detect that lemon smell.

Of course, nobody’s coming here
But still, I’m gratified.
If I claimed this was my new routine, though,
You will know I lied.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/23/2021 1:09:00 PM
ha ha ha we are so alike Ilene i am not a cleaning fan, if you do it it soon gets messed up again lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/23/2021 12:02:00 PM
Its nice to have a clean house but a little bit of dust never hurt anyone. Tom
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Date: 3/23/2021 11:51:00 AM
- I call these homes "catalog homes" ... it does not look like people (or pets) live in these homes - Yes, I wash a little every day ... but, it does not shine ... and you will completely sure find one or several dust dots :))) - A humorous and lovely poem, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2021 11:08:00 AM
My late wife kept an immaculate house as did one of my aunts, but no one dared move at my aunt's home for fear of incurring her wrath; she berated her father to death for cigarette ashes dropping off his cigarette, so enjoy having an home one can live in! Aloha! Rico
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