Time To Answer *

This wake, I owed it to you, my defining moment :
for the raw melding, of life imprisonement
and death behind the bars. The sin had
	
seeped slowly in the foundations. A blurred view
of the caravan passing on the shifting sand
of quarter-century; the devastation had turned

black in smug oasis, the victim will not
become virgin again. Blind dead will monitor
the course of grievers. On to her tongue

I leave the endless stars and you will forget
the bull-dosed windows and weeping walls
of incaracerated house where the daily meals

were sex and rape ; the strange shadows
of crime and pardon are breaking now
in blue sky after the defeating moon.



SATISH VERMA
•	After hearing the verdict on Josef Fritzl on 19th March 09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/31/2010 7:25:00 AM
Smile ~ "Hello Beautiful, Gifted & Precious Satish Verma;" I hope that life has been treating "Your Radiance" perfectly dear and, I look forward to being near "Your Beauty" again; "Your Souls Verse;" never to look away!!! ~ And, "Thank You for 'Your Sweetness'" of a reply; joy inside ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Beautiful of Days, 'Dear Lovely Satish,' Amid The Deepest Oceans, of 'The Deepest Love;'" Bye Beautiful Lady!:) ~
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Date: 8/25/2010 1:45:00 PM
John ,You are an amazing person. Idonot deserve the compliments you shower on me. Iappreciate your affections. Thank you very much. Satish
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Date: 8/25/2010 7:39:00 AM
Smile ~ I am going to be logging out of here after posting this last com to "Your Majesticness Dear" for, I have things to do and yet, I am soo very deeply hoping that I shall hear from "You!!!" ~ "Astonishing Poem Soo Gripping; A Fave" ~ "My Love And Warmth To You Always, And 'All You Love,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Blessed And Beautiful of Days Dear, 'Amid The Arms of Tranquilities, Neverending Love;'" Bye Beautiful Satish!:) ~
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Date: 8/25/2010 7:30:00 AM
Smile ~ It is not my dream to be surrounded by many here at Soup but, to be sooo very blessed, to know that "You" are a part of my world here would, make my heart rejoice with joy I believe!!! ~ Thus, I am deeply hoping that "Your Beauty" shall find it within "Your Precious Heart," to allow myself to be a part of "Your Beautiful Souls World" here at Soup!!? ~ It would be an honour unto myself for, "I Consider 'You' To Be 'A Priceless Treasure,' Dear, 'Beautiful Satish Verma!!!'" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/25/2010 7:23:00 AM
Smile ~ "I Love 'Your Beautiful Verse Satish;'" for it is but this sincere and compelling reflection of such a beautiful again, "Heart and Soul" ~ One which it seems perhaps, has endured such an uncomfortable and sorrowed environment possibly, brushing against the beauty inside of themselves; tainting and to some degree perhaps, stealing away from they, the glow amid the world wherein they have lived and have come to perceive and to know; perhaps?! ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/25/2010 7:17:00 AM
Smile? ~ Just another amazingly stirring and captivating write by an extremely beautiful soul!!! ~ "Hello Dear Lovely, Profound And Gifted Satish Verma" ~ Again, I wished to make a special stop here at Soup away from the crowd that I may visit "Your Wonderful Light" after viewing "Your Brilliances" post this morn dear lady and, to ask "You" why, "You" have never stopped by, to at least say "Hello" unto myself? ~ ....Cont:)
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