Time, Time Precious Time

Oh, if I could only turn back time, my mom would be living a life sublime; and not a name engraved in stone, now, I stand here weeping all alone. I should be visiting mom at home, but, by myself on country drives I roam; I miss those days mom- of adventure, driving into the unknown to venture. Oh, mom you are to me precious, now, time is slipping and I am anxious. As a child in your bed I would climb, even when you were sick and I was grown; as a child my hair you would comb, now all I have to hold is your picture; oh, turn back time to days precious. ______________________________________ October 7, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Time, Time Precious Time Copyright Protected, ID 19-1187-003-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Rhyme Pattern - aabbccddee abcde Written for the contest, If Only We Could Turn Back The Hands Of Time sponsor, Silent One Second Place
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Date: 10/17/2019 7:41:00 AM
Congrats Constance on a very touching write of past fond memories, congrats on a fine win!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/17/2019 9:24:00 AM
John, thank you so much for the congrats and compassion!
Date: 10/15/2019 11:53:00 PM
Lovely memories in lovely rhyme ... In the air a touching chime ... Congratulations on your win sublime, Dear Heart ...
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Constance La France
Date: 10/16/2019 8:58:00 AM
Probir, thanks for the congratulations and the sublime, I love that word !
Date: 10/15/2019 3:57:00 PM
Wonderful Dear Heart. Brought back memories of my dear mother who left us in 1988. Thank you for that. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2019 10:43:00 PM
Timothy thank you for the wonderful, sometimes its hard to look back on the memories but sometimes it brings a smile to our hearts ~
Date: 10/15/2019 9:59:00 AM
My friend, this exceptionally composed piece inspires and awes me with its expression of deep and profound love for your mother and appreciation for her love and care given to you her beloved child! Congratulations on your placement and this is a fav...
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Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2019 10:44:00 PM
Robert, thanks for the great comment and compliment and the FAV !
Date: 10/15/2019 3:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win and Bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2019 10:44:00 PM
Gina, thanks so much for the congrats and love !
Date: 10/14/2019 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Dear Heart :)
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Constance La France
Date: 10/14/2019 1:50:00 PM
Heidi, thanks so much for the congratulations !
Date: 10/14/2019 12:30:00 PM
if only, but sometimes it is not because of anything we could possibly do.... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 10/14/2019 1:51:00 PM
Silent, thanks for the inspiring contest, you always take me to a special place, and thanks for my placement !
Date: 10/7/2019 8:17:00 PM
I love my mom soo soooo much, also. She is a huge part of me and my life. Your poem is so sad to me, yet with a good memory, Bless you always, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2019 9:26:00 AM
Gina, hold your mom close to your heart. My mom was more that a mother to me but my best friend in the world, when I lost her I was shattered, still am, she was my rock, my safe harbor, my anchor now I float like a balloon set free ~ Thank you for visiting my poem !
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