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Time Ticking By

Freedom is a state I seek
Every moment I lie awake
Another sunray filters in  
Rousing rumors when sleep set in

Over thinking every move I make
Forgetting nothing but what matters
Mindless muddles of troubled thought  
No erasing what's unwittingly taught

Empty cupboards and a life that's hollow 
Morning such a tough pill to swallow
A day with me on the back porch swing
Listening closely to the Tanagers sing 

Another day   just like the last
Time ticking by but not to fast

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/2/2016 9:21:00 AM
'Empty cupboards and a life that's hollow Morning such a tough pill to swallow' My friend, you did great with the lines. However, Every moment in life is precious. O stanza is great. I linger for your reply beneath Thanks for posting this excellent poem..........A.M.
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