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Time Stands Still


a Walk in-
the woods    with debussy's
prelude to the afternoon
in my ears

time    stands    still

the warmth of the sun
music echoing amongst trees
the chant
of songbirds

oh peace and tranquility embrace

the benedictine monks
of santa domingo
a     single     melodic note
sung in unison

I listen to the ocean surf
the wild
  cascading
    waves
      sweeping
        me away
in the voice    of nature
time
stands
still

meditation with bach and beethoven
mozart's concerto    shuman's     fantasy
the piano  enchants me
the violins take me away

I am oneness with earth
trees that     touch the sky   bring
serenity
tranquility

time    stands    still

morning elegance
  storms and wind and soft rain
    hidden mountain retreats
      enchanted meadows swaying

wild thunder    songbird serenades  
nightfall's cloak        wolves calling
hidden coves and woodland ferns
moss clinging and wild flowers growing
in meadows

blowing hair
      picker of buttercups 
                             daisies
dandelions
life is chaotic and confusing
                  I find the serene and peaceful
amongst ponds and streams
listening to classical music
                           oh listen to the loons

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January 7, 2016

Free Verse

Entered in the contest, Your Best Free Verse
sponsor, A Poet Destroyer

Seventh Place

Entered in the contest, Free Verse Extravaganza
sponsor, Catie Lindsey

Did not place
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A   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Broken, thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Wonderful write Broken.. congrats on big win!
La France Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats ~
Raven Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Hi Broken Wings, an excellent piece of poetry you lay before us again. Congratulations on your win in the contest....VLAD.
La France Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:01 AM
Vlad, thanks for the excellent and compliment and congratulations, appreciate ~
Scars Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 4:20 PM
BW, congrats on your placement in the contest!! -luloo
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Laura, thanks for the congrats, appreciate !!
A   Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Broken, Congratulation on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Its a lie" if you'd like. I hope you are enjoying your day. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Linda, thanks for a great contest and for my placement ~
Shahein Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Oh my dear BW this is so sweet and beautiful , I'm delighted by reading it , hugs / / :) dalia
La France Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Dalia, thank you for that beautiful comment ~
Sage Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:37 PM
now, I saw the beautiful picture and imagined a scene, oh wow! fantastic how the magic works, time stood still in there..excellent write BW...as always
La France Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:27 PM
Sage, thanks for the wow, the fantastic and the excellent !
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