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Time Stands Still

Time Stands Still Time stands still No flaw in this moment Perfection in my eyes No anticipation Every second worthy No minute unnoticed Because when I’m with you Time stands still

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 11:34:00 AM

Brittany, great poem. Love LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 4:58:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Brittany. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2011 7:55:00 PM

Cool one, Brittany. Congrats on your win

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/8/2011 5:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Britt. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2011 2:07:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Brittany

Ned Flanders

Date: 6/3/2011 11:47:00 AM

Now, this i do like, why? Because although it is in deed very personnal you have managed to take me completely on board and i have to say that the concept is very good. I sometimes think the title of a poem can be the bloody hardest thing to come up with as it can give to much away and let secrets out that you don"t want known until the end.. Enjoyed both. Cheers.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2011 4:23:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brittany. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol