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Time Stands Still

Time Stands Still

Time stands still 
No flaw in this moment 
Perfection in my eyes 
No anticipation 
Every second worthy 
No minute unnoticed 
Because when I’m with you 
Time stands still
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 10, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Brittany, great poem. Love LINDA
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 4:58 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Brittany. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 7:55 PM
Cool one, Brittany. Congrats on your win
Taylor Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Congrats on your win, Britt. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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June 8, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Brittany
Flanders Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 11:47 AM
Now, this i do like, why? Because although it is in deed very personnal you have managed to take me completely on board and i have to say that the concept is very good. I sometimes think the title of a poem can be the bloody hardest thing to come up with as it can give to much away and let secrets out that you don"t want known until the end.. Enjoyed both. Cheers.
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 4:23 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brittany. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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