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Time Stands Still

The Faded Garden Swing If the flaked paint on the old swing could speak, it would tell stories of days long ago, Of children's laughter and their bare, muddy feet, Of fireflies caught and imprisoned in empty jam jars, Like the fireflies, my memory flickers, trying to recall who lived across the street. The faded swing’s rusty chains creaked loudly under my weight, an old familiar song, And the scent in the air from the aged honeysuckle, still going strong, An old familiar perfume of yesteryear, At this moment, suspended between the then and now, time stands still. Once the echoes of children’s giggles, now a silent yard, Images of scraped knees, loud cries and a lemonade stall, In the distance, the sound of an old church bell rings, Here, on this faded garden swing, I sit in the past with the weight of what was and of what can never be again. Now, shadows linger in silence, Where children once soared with dreams, Oh, faded swing, a keeper of stories of joy and pain, You hold the essence where memories remain, At last, I am home, in the place where time stands still.

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Date: 4/6/2025 10:58:00 AM
Ahhh!! What a nice work about how sometimes memories can weight us down but then we realize we have to move on. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/6/2025 11:03:00 AM
Thank you so much for the read. In time we all have to move forward. Sending Blessings your way my dear friend.
Date: 4/4/2025 2:05:00 PM
Sweet memories zyroooooool
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/5/2025 5:51:00 AM
Oh gosh. All this time I thought you were a he. Heh heh. Sorry
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/4/2025 10:59:00 PM
It’s Ms.. she/her Stay Blessed Pal.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/4/2025 2:13:00 PM
Yessa. U2 Mr Zy sir
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/4/2025 2:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for the read, Tom. Wishing you a fabulous weekend my good friend.
Date: 4/3/2025 4:27:00 PM
I guess it is difficult to go back. I haven't wanted to visit those places, the place where my old school was torn down, friends buried in cemeteries. I like this poem. I relate.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/4/2025 6:04:00 AM
Hello Hilda, thank you for dropping by. Life is full of all sorts. Glad you like it, means a lot. Wishing you a wonderful day and a great weekend my dear friend.
Date: 4/3/2025 3:45:00 PM
One of your most beautiful poems, a fav in my book of memorable ones dear poet friend :)
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/4/2025 5:59:00 AM
Hello Rose, thank you so much for your beautiful words. Much appreciated. Wishing you a fabulous weekend, my poet friend.
Date: 4/3/2025 2:14:00 AM
I look back and wonder if I could become younger. Wishful thinking. I would not want to become young again.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/3/2025 6:25:00 AM
Hello Victor, thank you for the read, I think most of us do look back, each with our own reason. I look back because those were memories made when my parents were alive, so I visited my past often. Sending Blessings your way my friend. Enjoy your day and have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Date: 4/3/2025 1:42:00 AM
Dear zyrool, What a most descriptive and soulful poem this is woven from your heart, your words here emanate nostalgia and memories of time that stands still with so much of yesteryears, and i love the way youv described little details of everything, giving us a very sincere touch of your thoughts expressed here, sometimes yes scents of certain places and certain aromas do bring back so many memories for me too! I love everything about this touching poem! A fave it is! Sending you light always
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/3/2025 6:21:00 AM
Hello IE, thank for your beautiful words and for making it a fave, means a lot. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a fabulous day and a great weekend, my friend.
Date: 4/1/2025 7:08:00 AM
Happy memories Zyrool, you often wonder as you get older, where did time go. Tom
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/1/2025 7:38:00 AM
Thank you for the read and support, Tom. You’re so right I do wonder about that. Have a wonderful day my friend.
Date: 4/1/2025 1:49:00 AM
- Oh ... a wonderful poem ... a joy to read, Zyrool :) - hugs
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/1/2025 5:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, means a lot. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a fantastic new week ahead, my friend.
Date: 3/31/2025 11:46:00 AM
hello Zyrool, you really have good memories of thise time gone bye. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/31/2025 2:08:00 PM
Hello Zyrool, i hope all is well with you. you are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/31/2025 12:37:00 PM
Hello Darlene, thank you so much for dropping by and for the read. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead my friend.
Date: 3/31/2025 9:57:00 AM
Zyrool, a wonderful poem of times long gone of a shared home where the family lived among laughter and fun. The old rusty swing, and church bells that still ring, such sweet memories they bring… Poet pal Beryl
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/31/2025 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for dropping by and for your lovely words, Beryl. Means a lot. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my poet friend.
Date: 3/31/2025 8:28:00 AM
This is very beautiful and very touching, Zyrool! A wonderfully described recollection…
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/31/2025 12:23:00 PM
Hello Ilene, thank you so much for your kind words and the read. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a fabulous new week ahead, my friend.

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