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Time Stands Still

time stands still slow the pace of life a howling silence surreal as autumn tenor all shades of grey droop overhead eyes soaking up most somber thoughts piano notes gather in the clouds blaring echoes of solitude as silver teardrops collect in a hollow heart Submitted on March 16, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND 1090 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST AP: 2nd place 2020 Posted on October 11, 2018

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Date: 10/13/2018 5:27:00 AM
Reminds me of this drab overcast days we are having this weekend
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Date: 10/13/2018 6:31:00 AM
Yes, a good time for introspection... the we can doubly appreciate the return of the sun. Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 10/12/2018 3:50:00 PM
Well-crafted,...amazing verse,...love "howling silence" ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/12/2018 11:15:00 AM
Amazing, music in the rain very inspirational.
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Date: 10/12/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sheri. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/12/2018 10:44:00 AM
Breathtaking... LOVE this one! ;)
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Date: 10/12/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona.
Date: 10/12/2018 5:44:00 AM
great imagery, Line. Love "howling silence".
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Date: 10/12/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Agnes.

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