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Time Squared

waiting for
the ball to drop
thinking thoughts
most folks forgot or
didn't even think about

it's only
nine A M and
my balls are already
waiting to be dropped
but my baby says no no not

so to hold
and to keep i
remember when
i was a canvas on
her painter's skin a

progress 
in works but
imploring explore
and adorning what her
vision of finality is or has

                                bec      ome

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/15/2019 8:58:00 AM
very col poem.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/15/2019 9:34:00 AM
Thank you always Maureen, but I'm actually going to do a bit, yes me, Mr. Impromptu, of editing. Just some slight changes. (I'm just trying to get you to read it again so my number of views go up lol) No, really a few words need changed, and the ending line...

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