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Time Slipped Away

I started reading early The poetry on this site I had so much fun The day turned into night I’m not sure when it happened Or what I can say I enjoyed myself so much The time just slipped away It wasn’t really my plan To read all day long But everyone writes so well The time was just gone I really love this site And all that I have read I am honored to be here But now I’m heading to bed!

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Abraham L

Date: 4/25/2009 8:50:00 AM

Very good, could not have said it better. it is really a good site. This site is filled with something for everyone. No matter what you are going through, one can log on and get the encouragement, love, and comfort they need. very well put together, and thanks for your comments. Abe

Michael Chapman

Date: 3/24/2009 5:51:00 AM

this is cute i like it M.C

Cheryl Mccall

Date: 3/18/2009 5:40:00 PM

Im addicted to thise as I read poetry and stay up late at nite good write Smiles to you

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/11/2009 1:27:00 AM

Well goodnight Lena - I got to admit it happens to me all the time - It is very amazing and you told it so well - God Bless, MJ

Leon Wilson

Date: 3/10/2009 4:29:00 PM

Hi Lolita I like the simplicity of this poem, it has a lovely flow. We too cannot believe how long we stay up to on this site must be compulsive. God Bless. Leon

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/10/2009 3:18:00 PM

from the heart! delightful!

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/10/2009 8:30:00 AM

Spend way too much time here myself. I'm addicted! Your poem is so true as time seems to fly when you are on this site! Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 3/10/2009 7:42:00 AM

Ah, it's good to see that there are so many people out there like me. Excellent rhyme and such a clear truth in this one! Michael

Celeste Butler-Mendez

Date: 3/10/2009 6:48:00 AM

We love you too. It my pleasure to have read your work today, Lena, Celeste.

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/10/2009 5:59:00 AM

really cute poem

Belinda Parish

Date: 3/9/2009 9:17:00 PM

Sounds like me...lol. I start reading and don't know when to stop. Great write, Lena. And thank you for your comment on my poem, 'Farmer's Life'. It's dedicated to my Dad who was a farmer all his life.

Sandra Hudson

Date: 3/9/2009 8:03:00 PM

I know exactly what you mean...I don't get to comment half as much as I want to, Don't write as much as I'd like to, but hey I love this site! It offers so much talent and sense of family.-AA

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/9/2009 7:53:00 PM

Cute poem, and you sound like me....I get started on this site....and before I know it..the time has slipped away. Nite nite....don't let the bed bugs bite!!! lol...Carrie