Time Slipped Away

I started reading early
The poetry on this site
I had so much fun 
The day turned into night

I’m not sure when it happened
Or what I can say
I enjoyed myself so much
The time just slipped away

It wasn’t really my plan
To read all day long
But everyone writes so well
The time was just gone

I really love this site
And all that I have read
I am honored to be here
But now I’m heading to bed!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 25, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Very good, could not have said it better. it is really a good site. This site is filled with something for everyone. No matter what you are going through, one can log on and get the encouragement, love, and comfort they need. very well put together, and thanks for your comments. Abe
Chapman Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 5:51 AM
this is cute i like it M.C
Mccall Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 5:40 PM
Im addicted to thise as I read poetry and stay up late at nite good write Smiles to you
Jordan Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 1:27 AM
Well goodnight Lena - I got to admit it happens to me all the time - It is very amazing and you told it so well - God Bless, MJ
Wilson Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Hi Lolita I like the simplicity of this poem, it has a lovely flow. We too cannot believe how long we stay up to on this site must be compulsive. God Bless. Leon
Goff Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 3:18 PM
from the heart! delightful!
Winter Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Spend way too much time here myself. I'm addicted! Your poem is so true as time seems to fly when you are on this site! Love, Shar
Degenhardt Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 7:42 AM
Ah, it's good to see that there are so many people out there like me. Excellent rhyme and such a clear truth in this one! Michael
Butler-Mendez Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 6:48 AM
We love you too. It my pleasure to have read your work today, Lena, Celeste.
Atanacio Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 5:59 AM
really cute poem
Parish Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 9:17 PM
Sounds like me...lol. I start reading and don't know when to stop. Great write, Lena. And thank you for your comment on my poem, 'Farmer's Life'. It's dedicated to my Dad who was a farmer all his life.
Hudson Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 8:03 PM
I know exactly what you mean...I don't get to comment half as much as I want to, Don't write as much as I'd like to, but hey I love this site! It offers so much talent and sense of family.-AA
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 7:53 PM
Cute poem, and you sound like me....I get started on this site....and before I know it..the time has slipped away. Nite nite....don't let the bed bugs bite!!! lol...Carrie
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