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Time Shows!

lavish parade of fine costumes and high end masks floats galore….time shows

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Date: 11/17/2010 9:42:00 PM
Makes you want to be there, wanting to share in the revelry. Imagery is excellent!
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Date: 11/17/2010 2:11:00 PM
Beautiful description of a parade unfolds in this wonderful Senryu!
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:59:00 PM
like time square? enjoyed readifn today... are you keeping jimmy straight??
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:38:00 PM
Very descriptive of a parade..Sara
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:12:00 AM
The parade of time is captured so well in this incredible senryu, Audrey. Imagine having a series of floats depicting different civilizations throughout history! Well done, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:50:00 AM
Hey, Audrey, I love this. Could I suggest changing show time to time shows ... think of it. Awesome
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