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Time Pass By

A crazy gloomy highway, Whacky streets of birmingham, Catostrophe like winter bloated in winds Tremble like passion cursed to flow, Sounds where i heard the first smirk, Her eyelashes twinkled like whisky sky, An irish coffee mocked me to look, Her raindroping hair wrinkled my eyes, An smothering truth or a soothing lie, Sip on sip coffee hanged me high, It was a rainy day,no one to say ,no one for bay, It was her tranquilizer which made me die, on the very moment which now pass by That love on sight like a first pie bite I hinder this road to look for her, Which now looks like a labyrinth masscara that she floss on, Roads came narrow, i glazed on to follow, She moved to a door,that went inside lamped on floor It was lazy me ,sure she was nice and it could have been a night but now its better begin for my Redbricks lane, My days are bad and luck is hard, let it be let time pass by coz her eyes are still in my eyes, and its still a long winter and coffe shop is just two blocks aside. by poems

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Date: 2/19/2016 11:17:00 PM
zawar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/29/2013 4:12:00 PM
Vaibhav, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/26/2013 11:03:00 PM
Vaibhav-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"
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