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Time Mover

I do not move in time Time moves in me Every decision I make Touches lives of destiny My greatness is discovered Hidden in my deepest fears As I face my demons I rise above the movement of years I am eternal My connections are good and strong People surround me on every side They’ve become my part of celestial song The nature of a mighty warrior Is to take up a sword and fight Identifying that the false battle Is always about right/wrong, black/white Written by Trudy Schrader 09-09-09 Note: Not one of my better poems, but the concept tweeks my buttons. The idea that there are time movers that walk amongst us is profound.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/29/2023 2:15:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Trudy Schrader
Date: 6/29/2023 6:15:00 AM

Thank you and all of Daddy God's heart to you.

Jay Narain

Date: 6/28/2023 9:44:00 AM

Who said, it is not your best poem. I liked it. Welcome souper.

Trudy Schrader
Date: 6/28/2023 2:43:00 PM

I've been here a while, but this is the first time I have had money for membership.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 4:33:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Trudy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/16/2011 11:57:00 AM

This entry is not that bad. You have decent descriptiveness and rhyming in this one. You have admitted this isn't one of your better poems. Let's see what you have called "better".

Trudy Schrader
Date: 6/28/2023 2:42:00 PM

My favorite is "I Will Not Stop For Grief." I was the making naked of my soul.