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Time Minichu

Years span Like breaking ripples around heaven, By a huffing, winded fan— Soon Cloud expressions on the sky, Long ago's faithless spaces, like new— Crime Drift lines Time Years span— Cloud expressions on the sky, Time

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Date: 6/19/2024 2:17:00 PM
You did this form very well..
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Date: 6/19/2024 9:31:00 AM
Very interesting one, Paige. Time is so mystical
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Date: 6/19/2024 6:58:00 AM
I was just sunset gazing, the sky is beautiful, and then as i read this i think of the sunset that i just saw. Beautifully delivered and written: pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 6/18/2024 8:13:00 PM
a beauty this - great opening stanza
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