Time, Like Crashing Waves

Time Like Crashing Waves 

Time, like waves crashing on a smooth-faced sand,
Leaves imbedded ripples on shores of memory
And drop-offs marked with steep undertow warnings
In foamy filigrees etched on recollection
Of abandoned shells searching for lost pearls
Rogue of ever rolling thunder reveals 
A pulsing tide of perpetual motion
A seething thrust in ebb and flow unstoppable
The hidden undercurrent of volcanic change
From dawn to dusk and through midnight
Rolling breakers storm the beachhead
In gyrating riptides rhyme and rhythm
In white caps dripping with sweet juices
To expose beauty hidden in the shallows
Veiled beneath blistered wild gales  
Spindrift masks forgotten sandcastles
As flowing swells returns dreams 
To the impatient pounding waves of decades
Elusive in the mists of unrelenting surges
Sinking into whirlpools, forgotten in new tides.

8-12-22
Contest: Simile
Sponsor: Hilo Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/15/2022 10:44:00 AM
Before now, I never thought But then I never tried To think of free verse poetry As very deep inside But when I read your imagery I slowly start to melt For beauty is the poetry Of life's sweet journey felt.
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Date: 8/13/2022 8:46:00 AM
So much wisdom in this brilliant piece. Every line evokes a stunning imagery. Breathtakingly beautiful! A sure winner!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/13/2022 2:57:00 PM
JCB, many thanks and much gratitude. Your note brings my heart much joy. I have to admit it took me awhile to pull my thoughts together as they felt like those crashing waves in the surf - elusive and playing hide and seek with me! I am so glad that this poem touched your heart! Sending you many blessings dear friend!
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