Time Lapse Haiku

satin skies showed new Sol soft summer sun, now setting streams of stars do smile 7/20/2023

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2023 10:37:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, I am a fan of Haiku. It has been a while since I have seen the stars and the moon. The sky has been clouded lately . enjoyed the poem. Hugs. xxxx-ooo. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2023 4:14:00 AM

I think it is because of the fires. burning. Many firemen have died from these fires. The sky is always clouded. No stars or moon Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2023 4:11:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, These fries are still burning. it seems hard to be put out. I smeell the smoke sometimes. depending where the wind is blowing from. Yes it does cause dark skies, Oh ! i have not seen the moon or stars for the longest time.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2023 12:29:00 PM

Thank you for commenting. Haikus are hard to write Glad you appreciated my feeble effort))) Those Canadian fires caused dark skies and horrendous air quality ….stay well Merci, Panagiota

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 7/21/2023 9:32:00 AM

Normally, I'm not a fan of Haiku, but, Pangie this is understandable and very beautiful! Bob H

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2023 10:36:00 AM

I don’t write many how goes Robert, I got a POTD, ones once long ago… on a rhyming Haiku. you are right…. They are harder to write, then it seems It’s easier if you write a longer poem for me. So I’m here are experts at Haiku. I encourage you to try your hand at it you live in beautiful country that lens itself to this form. Thank you …Panagiota

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/21/2023 8:39:00 AM

Such beautiful imagery in this lovely new creation. Yes, my friend, I too have seen nights when the star did smile. A FAV... \God bless.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2023 10:32:00 AM

There is no doubt in my mind that you also have seen the stars smile. Because Robert, I have seen your heart smile. And I have a blessing ….As you are a friend star in the constellation of friends and life. please know how powerful you’ve been in my life. Panagiota

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/21/2023 3:01:00 AM

Good Morning Pangie. Your imagery is vivid and clear not to mention wonderful. Yes, the transition from day to night with all her wonder. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Blessings always (smile)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2023 10:29:00 AM

Good morning Miss Lisa, I am one who prefers night days! There is something magical that happens at sunset. I don’t know what that is. Well, then the moon comes dancing out and the night becomes as a Viennese waltz.. I am so blessed to have you read this, and I do mean that. Panagiota

Eve Roper

Date: 7/20/2023 10:18:00 PM

Nice, Stars do always smile. Great Haiku

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/21/2023 10:25:00 AM

Hi dear Eve! Thank you for the gift of a comment, Stars have always fascinated me. And many here! Panagiota