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over these dry leaves of vanished years where destiny has planted me a garden and fate devoured like a lover` s gaze; over these dry leaves i stand i stand i stand .......as one who lays all trust aside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/12/2008 4:39:00 PM
But you are still standing. Nice! I like the way it's layed out & the repetition.
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