Time Keeps Slipping Away

Time keeps slipping away Nothing will ever get done And you get that melancholy feeling You won't be able to see that sun You have fallen behind a great deal There are areas that need improvement This is no time for you to frolic Focus on being a better student

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Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 6/19/2018 2:03:00 PM

I know the feeling if you failed, I don't think I frolicked because I never went back because I'm disabled and so there's no need for me to finish school. My left arm had been crushed to 51 pieces so it's paralyzed and I have a hard time standing up, I doubt there would be jobs that will take me. Plus school does not really like me, I like school but school doesn't. Good sad poem. I hope you check some of my poems they're all mostly about God. Thank you and nice meeting u ~Jac