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Time Is No Barrier

Time is no Barrier On high, across the land and out to sea The mist of time will stay, and cast a veil Your love and thoughts alone, will drift to me No walls or words will stop, or help prevail To keep our love apart, so they shall see The up's and down's of life and death, we sail A chance meeting as eyes did gaze, passion! From morn till night, surpassed by lies so vile Poisonous words spoken quite violently Others whisper advice, to wait awhile To those we say, although, reluctantly Alone in hand we’ll walk along the aisle. In time, we hope we will instil, no doubt To those who care, is that, our love’s devout. Iambic Pentameter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/9/2012 10:18:00 PM
oh, and I take it this won? Congratulations!!
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Date: 2/9/2012 10:17:00 PM
the first stanza was perfectly metered, Allan. I love your message of the endurance of love with all its ups and downs!!
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Allen. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem Allan.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/5/2012 2:49:00 PM
Enjoyed this love-worthy write Allan, and well done on the win...)
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations Allan x
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:07:00 AM
Wonderful meter and true content. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:40:00 AM
Allan congrats on your win..David
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Allan
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Date: 2/2/2012 7:41:00 AM
Passionate!
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Date: 1/20/2012 2:48:00 PM
so far I can't see ANY meter mistakes keep on trucking! & submit when ready..Light & Love
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Date: 1/20/2012 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Allan,good one.- oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Allan Williams
Date: 1/20/2012 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, it took me longer to work out how to post it and then enter it into this meter contest, than it did to write it+

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