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Firstly, I would block all computer pop ups Because they drive poor Dan quite mad … But remember Poetry Soup get an income So if they disappear PS would be pretty sad! I would prescribe sunny days for everyone Because they brighten up dull times in our life But we still need refreshing showers of rain To rejuvenate our wonderful world again I pray a cure would be found for cancer And every other medical condition too People would enjoy a long and healthy life I hope it’s a dream that can come true Poverty, terrorism and war would cease to exist Sadly these issues are down to the human race I pray we can all live in peace and harmony And one day our earth will be a better place Contest If I could change the world sponsored by Dan Kearley 04~09~16

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Jerry T Curtis

Date: 4/10/2016 6:16:00 AM

using humor to set-up a serious note is quite effective way to make a point, nice job Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 4/10/2016 6:44:00 AM

Thanks Jerry I couldn't resist a little humour at the start of what is a serious poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2016 5:27:00 PM

as your genie, your wishes are granted, jan... what a marvelous write, whoot!..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2016 5:30:00 PM

Thanks Nette and what a wonderful world it would be:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2016 5:06:00 PM

If only..Enjoyed reading your entry to the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the comments on my work..I do dislike those bouncing ads but I know it is a necessary evil for the site to exist..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2016 5:13:00 PM

My son set up an add blocker and I no longer get them but thought i would add in a touch of humour to what is a serious subject:-) hugs jan xx

Samantha Withee

Date: 4/9/2016 2:37:00 PM

Lovely poem

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2016 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Samantha - there is a little humour in the first stanza but the rest is more serious:-) hugs jan xx

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/9/2016 2:26:00 PM

Hi Jan, It is a brilliant poem with powerfull message. I like it.7 out of 7 from me.Best wishes for contest.....with llove

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2016 2:30:00 PM

Thanks Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2016 2:08:00 PM

- I share your wishes .... the keyword is perfect: HARMONY !!! - Wonderful written, Jan - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2016 2:10:00 PM

definitley Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/9/2016 1:25:00 PM

What a wonderful world that would be Jan...Lovely,lovely poem indeed.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2016 1:32:00 PM

Thanks Charma - yes we can pray one day we will find a cure for these terrible illnesses and peace in the world is something we can pray will happen:-) hugs Jan xx

Daver Austin

Date: 4/9/2016 12:24:00 PM

A compendium of bliss here, dear Jan, but what would Donald Trump do for the pissed off vote? Seriously, you be cool. Love, daver

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2016 1:02:00 PM

Hmmm I am thankful we don't have all the election hoo har to deal with - maybe I should have done a verse on getting rid of politicians lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 4/9/2016 12:00:00 PM

A superb entry for the contest! good luck lady :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2016 1:01:00 PM

Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/9/2016 11:41:00 AM

I really like this poem. You progressed each verse to deeper and deeper issues. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2016 1:01:00 PM

Thanks Arthur - thought I would start of with humour for Dan and then progress it to a little more serious issues:-) hugs Jan xx