Time for a Potty, err party

Time for a birthday potty... err Party
For the one who writes a wee bit naughty
The birthday girl is Jan
She's sitting on the can
I think she might be farty... err forty!
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Kitchin Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 7:15 AM
Lin, ha ha, a great birthday limerick for Jan.
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 11:23 AM
- AWESOME FUN !!! - hugs
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Thanks a bunch, and hugs to you!
M  Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Love it and perfect for the Queen of Pooparama!! Very clever and funny lovely Lin! You are a good friend to Jan! Debx
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Thank you very much, my sweet friend. We're all good friends, and that includes you.
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 9:18 AM
ha ha ha this is hilariarse! Thanks so much Lin lol_) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 9:39 AM
You're so very welcome!
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Very clever Lin, exactly the type of toilet humour she loves, be a great poem for her birthday card, happy 40th birthday Jan even if you’re indisposed on the can! Cheers David
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Chick, you can be whatever age you declare yourself to be ;-) Hugs back to you!
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 9:19 AM
err excuse me Lin I am 21 again again again plus vat lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 8:40 AM
Thanks, David. Jan might be a shade over forty, but I mustn't say how shady or she'll reciprocate by writing a limerick about me.
Rodgers Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Hello Lin, I laughed and loved your limerick and such comedy! - Blessings, Daniel
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 9:19 AM
Thanks Lin and than you for your comment Daniel:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Thank you, Daniel. I'm not sure you're aware of Jan's reputation for writing bathroom type humorous limericks, but this is the best gift I could come up with for her. I'm delighted you found it laughable.
Lawless Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 6:19 AM
...but if you were forty and i was forty then you'd be forty two
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 9:20 AM
ha ha ha fun comment John:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 6:28 AM
oh heck, let's split the difference. Now, we're each forty one. Stop being rational to my irrational thoughts. lol.
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 4:32 AM
Lol, she will be after all the different cakes she'll be eating. Tom
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 9:23 AM
I had raspberry cherry bakewell after lunch and then discovered our lovely friend had purchased another slab for me and given it to my hubby in secret lol. going to save it for tomorrow so i can continue the birthday a little longer, its been fun! and thanks so much for the poem Lin! hugs janxx
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 5:08 AM
HA No doubt, Tom. Glad I'm not her next door neighbor today.
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