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Time Fools You

time fools you

when there are
limited tomorrows
yesterdays become 
most important
back when time
filled the horizon
with possibilities
and you could stretch
to fill the world.

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Pipping Stars

September 8, 2017 at 7:26 AM

yeah looking back ... hands held with no regret ... you have captured a drought of a feel in this write ... or so this reader reads it to feel ... or should he feel it to read ... hmm .... says me ...

Patricia Cresswell

September 8, 2017 at 12:17 PM

One does not teach poetry. Oh you can teach forms and punctuation but true poetry is born in the soul. You either have it or not. You have it.

Pipping Stars

September 8, 2017 at 8:35 AM

here ... take this feeling ... put it inn your pocket ... rub on it ... we know it feels good ... now ... write about it ... don't forget to mention the cotton candy pacifier ... hmm ... "poetry" you say ... teach me this morning...

Patricia Cresswell

September 8, 2017 at 7:50 AM

Hi Timothy thank you. I think reading poetry can not help but be both feeling and reading. I think reading comes first to introduce the poem feeling intermixes. That's my thought.

Russell Sivey

September 8, 2017 at 3:50 AM

Wow, Patricia, this is a very awesome write my friend! I REALLY enjoyed reading your incredible poem here this morning! You have written such a fabulous and grandiose piece, I am amazed at your skillful art here! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!

Patricia Cresswell

September 8, 2017 at 7:31 AM

Thank you Russell. I hope you are on the mend.