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Time Flies Aloof

Days pass aloof to all hearts reap, strays memories we wish to keep. Ploys of time constantly remold joys that we wish to ever hold. While eyes close to deeply reflect, vile time spies flashbacks to infect. Should time leave my recall intact - could be my joy would first react!

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/26/2025 7:39:00 PM

I love this, CayCay! Congratulations on your top win in my contest!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/25/2025 12:54:00 PM

First three words…finding joy in time’s passing days! Congrats, CayCay!

David Crandall

Date: 3/25/2025 8:23:00 AM

Great us of language, cool poem about time. I guess it can be aloof. it just keeps relentlessly moving forward, sometimes, taking a toll.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/10/2025 3:24:00 AM

Darn! Why am I so bad at rhymes and you, my dear Cay Cay are so good. Just keep them coming. Let not memories erase the past. So well written.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:20:00 PM

It's so nice having you back here and seeing a poem like this one. It looks like a contest entry. Is it? Time is a constant theme for me as well, Caycay

Len Gasun

Date: 2/9/2025 2:13:00 AM

So creative and brilliant my dear poet friend Cay. Loving this and enjoyed a lot. A great winning entry in a contest. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blesings to you always and best wishes. Hugs

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/8/2025 8:56:00 PM

Joy be the dominant force in our recollection of the past.Very well written

Paige Hind

Date: 2/8/2025 5:58:00 PM

I liked your view on Time. It can be fickle, magical, bad, good...<3

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/8/2025 10:25:00 AM

A verse of wisdom CayCay, lovely to see you back. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Ink Empress

Date: 2/8/2025 8:16:00 AM

Dear cay cay, you are such a natural at rhymes and i absolutely love the depth of this poem, i always find a poem that talks about time inspiring and resonating and yours really did connect, and i must say yes time does play tricks on us sometimes and we are often left with memories that surround us, this is a poem that many would sit and connect with for its evocative nature. I love the flow and of your lines too! Pleasure reading you today . Sending you light always

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/8/2025 7:17:00 AM

There's my Cay Cay, gem after gem will now appear, this is a beautiful rhyming poem written with a true heart and such wise words, write on dear friend! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/8/2025 3:26:00 AM

Wow, such a deeply reflective and thoughtful write this is, dear! I'm awestruck by your writing style and ability of carving so many evocative ideas within a few words whilst maintaining an effortless flow throughout with stunning rhymes. As moments pass, memories trail our hearts and the twists of time cease to give us a second to pause & reflect... I absolutely resonated with your words here! So glad to read your poetry for the first time, today! Sending best wishes and light ~

Lin Lane

Date: 2/7/2025 1:56:00 PM

Great rhyming with words of wisdom, CayCay.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 2/7/2025 2:18:00 PM

Thank you, dear heart ... CayCay