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Time Flies

thick hair, no hair, wow
young man, then older man now ...
it snuck up on us





3/18/2023

Poetry form: Senryu

Photo credits:  Billion Photos via Canva Pro

At times like this, I'm drawn to the lyrics of "A Hazy Shade of Winter," written by Paul Simon and recorded and released by Simon & Garfunkel in 1966:

"...Funny how my memory skips
While looking over manuscripts
Of unpublished rhyme
Drinking my vodka and lime
I look around
Leaves are brown now
And the sky is a hazy shade of winter ..."

Also, in reply to you grammarians out there who feel you know the definitive answer to the modern English mystery of sneaked vs snuck, please consider the following Mirriam Webster "Words at Play" article entitled "'Sneaked' or 'Snuck': Which is correct?"  It reads in part: "Over the past 120-odd years "snuck" has become by some estimations the more common past tense form in the US. Some people object to the sneaky upstart -  especially speakers of British English - but it appears regularly and without commentary in respected publications on both sides of the pond."  There's more information in the article, especially how "snuck" sneaked into the language.  It's pretty sneaky. ;) merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/snuck-or-sneaked-which-is-correct

I also have a poetic license, which expires on Friday, December 31, 9999, that allows me to use whatever word suits me at any given moment. It really comes in handy during moments like this. You really ought to consider obtaining such if you don't already have one. ;) 

Tempus Fugit - Cheers!
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Bauer Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 12:15 PM
ha! i very much enjoyed your poem, mark, but even more, your grammatical explanations and your description of your "poetic license." very funny stuff!
Toney Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 9:21 PM
Thank you, Ilene. You’ve made my day!
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