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Time Erasers

I have a friend so dear though clever she's not clear to life and these things her phone constantly rings but to answer it is she don't when to be somewhere she won't if so she's surely late even for a date she has no sense of time that doesn't seem to chime I always behold the watch I'm dependable don't botch I ask myself this though is time just a show so we will be swift chasers one day we'll be time erasers

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/10/2020 1:19:00 AM

"she has no sense of time that doesn't seem to chime" this describes my identical twin perfectly. Mom says she always "wants to make an entrance". I, on the other hand, am usually an hour early everywhere I go.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/10/2020 10:11:00 AM

We have a lot in common ;)

Joseph May

Date: 10/9/2020 1:28:00 PM

Being punctual is always best, Very nicely penned Angela

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/9/2020 4:14:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate you reading and commenting. :)

John Watt

Date: 10/8/2020 9:45:00 AM

Time does make us 'swift chasers' and adds a measure of stress to our lives. But it can be frustrating dealing with people who are always late to appointments or meetings especially when your own time is wasted. Nice write ~ John

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/8/2020 5:54:00 PM

Thank you, John. I deal with it the best way that I know how :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/7/2020 6:17:00 PM

Enjoyed this 'timely' write, Angela.... Sometimes I think that punctuality is overrated... :) gw

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/8/2020 7:14:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon for reading and commenting. Maybe it is a little overrated at times ;)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/7/2020 10:57:00 AM

I always try to be punctual. Your friend would soon see the last of me. ~~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/7/2020 3:53:00 PM

I've thought about it ever now and then. I believe in giving people a chance to redeem themselves first.Thank you, Victor for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/7/2020 10:54:00 AM

- Terribly annoying ... tell her what you mean ... a good friend should understand, Angela :) - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/7/2020 3:55:00 PM

I've told her a few times. I think it's just in her nature. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. I really appreciate it. :)