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Time Elapse

It's a mystical world. Sometimes on Discovery TV, there's time-elapse to teach and dazzle us. We might see that naked jay (before he's turned to blue) in just mere moments transforming! He masquerades in feathers and quickly grows. Maybe we will witness the feeble endeavors which finally propel him into flight; as the camera follows him, he goes. . . Time elapse. On some enchanted tropic isle is the species of a tree that some of us have never seen. The camera's eye might focus on a random bud among its glossy leaves. Soon it blossoms pink petals and if we watch some more, perhaps we'll see the purple of its star apple emerging. Then we'll see it grow, and if left not plucked, shrivel up and go. . . We are but mere ions in the spectrum of a universe we've entered through a magic door. Miraculously born, we grow. But at first it all seems so slow. . . Then one day we try our wings. Some of us may soar. Others, like an apple never tried, will fall. But all of us will look back before we go, and we'll think how much it seemed a dream. Time elapse. . . and then we're gone. (Adjusted to exactly 200 words!) For Laura Loo's Any Free Verse Poem In 200 Words or Less Contest

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Date: 11/16/2012 8:46:00 AM
This is a very clever poem, Andrea, just love this, a poem of today for today....
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Date: 10/5/2011 4:56:00 PM
congrats on your win with this profound and lovely poem andrea, but do we really want to be winners in a contest for losers haha ALL the poems in this contest are winners in my eyes :-)
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2011 1:43:00 AM
wow... congrats, Andrea... very thoughtful... left me to ponder...hmm.. :)
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Date: 10/2/2011 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!====Lori
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Date: 10/2/2011 6:34:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on a top ten sweet success with dynamic words of poetry my friend..luv..
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:23:00 PM
I felt like I was reading a painting hung solo on an infinitely vast museum wall with this one, Andrea. I like to feel like that, thanks!! And preesh the support :) Beauty day, Namaste~N
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:58:00 PM
A spectrum of an outward view. Turns inward to show something personal too. A fanciful description of a journey's flight. Times endless joy comes into sight.
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:18:00 AM
Kind of a funny thing, as I read this I just keep thinking "If I could just get in the head of a poet like this, I'm sure i'll know what her secret is!" because I just couldn't help feeling like every line read itself to me, and I couldn't tell why. Think it's that thing.. what's it called? Talent, art.
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Date: 7/22/2011 10:11:00 AM
Indeed, we are just specks in the universe, Andrea. When I feel one with nature -- fishing or hiking through the woods -- I realize this even more. I hope you did well in Catie's contest. And what you said about doctors -- you bet I agree. At least the chiropractor provides hope and relief. Dadgum doctor says there's no cure and just wants to medicate. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/21/2011 5:03:00 PM
a very sad ending, reminding us of our immortality, but well said. I found this very insightful. i like how you started with something so simple and took us deeper and deeper, until the truth of it hits us in the end.
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Date: 7/21/2011 2:25:00 AM
I am a huge fan of nature documentaries. This poem is right on with some of the interesting titles I feast upon. I hope you are doing well andrea. nice work again!
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Date: 7/21/2011 12:02:00 AM
I really liked how you related time elapse to life, Andrea-- I think you ended this just wonderfully-- sure left a lasting impression on me :) hugs to you sweetie
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:11:00 AM
I love this thoughtful piece, Andrea
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:49:00 AM
What terrific insight here. Beautifully worded and well expressed. I loved this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:26:00 AM
A flowing Freeverse Andrea ! I'm a Nature channel man, so you've wowed me with this great entry ! Thought provoking ya know ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 7/20/2011 2:52:00 AM
An interesting write here Andrea.....wonderful poem.Best wishes:)
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Date: 7/19/2011 8:59:00 PM
Check your soup mail Andrea. Lainie
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:17:00 PM
What a lovely write on the occasions and events that fade away, Andrea
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Date: 7/19/2011 3:45:00 PM
I like nature shows a lot myself. And you give a haunting portrait of life and exsistence here as well! Love & Peace Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/19/2011 10:52:00 AM
Wow Andrea, I just love this awesome write, all the best for Catie's contest ;)lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/19/2011 10:12:00 AM
Lovely entry Andrea, the best to you in the contest.
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Date: 7/19/2011 9:23:00 AM
enjoyed this poem and good luck on Catie's contest. love phyl
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:29:00 AM
enjoyed reading your work....amazing world we live in. these magical events usually go by unseen by us. Thanks for the looksee.
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Date: 7/19/2011 4:09:00 AM
this was awesome good luck in the contest. cory
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