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time to sow your seed fluffy dandelion clock drifting on the breeze 6th February 2015

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Date: 2/21/2015 7:53:00 AM
This is very sweet. :) Hugs, Alicia, xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/21/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Alicia:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/8/2015 6:58:00 PM
Love this, Jan. So few words create such powerful imagery. Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/8/2015 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Sandra was just a fun write - I do love the impact of this short form:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/7/2015 6:02:00 AM
Great image Jan...I love watching my daughter blow them...hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/7/2015 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Tim - a childhood memory for us all:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/7/2015 2:57:00 AM
love the vision in this piece jan wishing you a great weekend pal
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/7/2015 5:20:00 AM
Thanks Liam:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 11:10:00 PM
wonderful!!!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/7/2015 2:18:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed it Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 7:44:00 PM
Never heard of "dandelion clocks"? However, before last week's big blizzard, there were a few dandelions in blown where there was still a patch of green grass! Hardy flowers I'd say. I, too, have written several small poems about this flower, and a few longer ones, mostly about lawn-lovers who hate them. / M
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Date: 2/6/2015 7:49:00 PM
The trouble with dandelions is they are so prolific and our childhood fun is a gardeners nightmare:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 6:41:00 PM
Pretty! :) I love it! :) I can't wait to see the "other white stuff" since all we have is snow! :) hugsxxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/6/2015 6:42:00 PM
Dandelions are so pretty except when they are thriving in the middle of my lawn lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 2/6/2015 6:27:00 PM
Those dande lions can be fierce! I did enjoy blowing and waching the seeds flow through the air when I was a kid.
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Date: 2/6/2015 6:31:00 PM
I think it is a memory many of us can relate to Richard:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 5:12:00 PM
This is a lovely haiku, Jan. Reminds me that spring is on the way...but also that time is flying by fast...maybe too fast:) hugs // paul
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Date: 2/6/2015 5:15:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment - the older I get the quicker the years seem to fly by Paul:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 4:52:00 PM
Lovely dear Jan, I felt the sweet breeze upon my cheek. 7
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Date: 2/6/2015 4:55:00 PM
Thanks so much David:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 4:52:00 PM
Very nice, Jan. You must be thinking ahead to summer :)
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Date: 2/6/2015 4:57:00 PM
Spring is on its way on our little Island oh and then those summer days and nights to follow - can't wait for some warmth and long sunny days :-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 3:31:00 PM
I like dandy lions. Do you remember when they mentioned them in The Wizard of OZ? I think it was the Lion who mentioned them.
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Date: 2/6/2015 3:39:00 PM
yes I remember it - it was in the song 'If I only had a Brain' thanks for the lovely comment Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 3:12:00 PM
Pretty pretty pretty, baby girl! Hugs
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Date: 2/6/2015 3:15:00 PM
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/6/2015 3:14:00 PM
aww thank you my beautiful friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 2:46:00 PM
- The words provide a beautiful image of time that fly - I wish you a wonderful weekend, Jan !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/6/2015 3:08:00 PM
:-) :-) I am sure I am older than you so I disagree lol I love your new avatar:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2015 3:00:00 PM
- I love it more !!!! :)))) ................ - I have blown most :))))))
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/6/2015 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise - i love the image - i am sure all of us enjoyed blowing the dandelion clocks in our childhood:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 2:31:00 PM
Ahhh! Enjoyed your creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read tonight. Thanks for the visit...Sara
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Date: 2/6/2015 2:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara I always appreciate your comments:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2015 2:28:00 PM
Jan, this haiku is so pretty and I really like the picture that accompanies it, lovely and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/6/2015 2:30:00 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely comment Broken Wings:-) Hugs jan xx