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Dealing In Time Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May Written 3/25/2026

Time Dollars

I walk with confidence into the world. 
My silver hair is all pinned up in curls. 
Every step knowing that my time is money 
Listening to the sounds is making it more sunny.

A vault full, starting when I was young, 
as the house was never quite full of tongue-
in-cheek, tending to be taken lightly.
 Mom would say, "Up to bed, hoodlums," nightly. 

Those meaningful times when I could dig 
up that pot of money that had grown big. 
I was the oldest, the one who kept order. 
Now, old as I’ve become, I'm a hoarder.

My life is a tangled patchwork blanket. 
Under rules and sworn oaths of loyalty, a bandit. 
How many hours of time turned into currency?
A dreamer with echoes of laughter, all so cozy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful "Time Dollars" write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
May Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 7:18 AM
Congrats on your win Eve, Nicely done
Jones Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 11:51 PM
Love the reflecting reminiscing in your winning poem! Congratulations!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 1:51 AM
Wonder why in our old age we become hoarders! Loved your poem. Best for a win.
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