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Time Disappears

Time Disappears Time disappears, the hours, the days Lost in the shadows, a sundial haze Seizing the moments our memories trace Drawing the curtain, these thoughts to erase Still I ignore every clock on the wall Each ticking second, the minutes that fall For all I see is the beautiful view Of every new day I am starting with you Good Morning Soupers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/13/2017 1:45:00 PM
Always great to hearing yourvoice . nice !!
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Date: 3/12/2017 7:36:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. You and your entry have reached the emotive element for sure among all other poetic factors. So beautiful are such words and thoughts. Time does disappear when in the realm of this moment in time and thought. Well done entirely. Hope your weekend is going well.
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Date: 3/9/2017 3:11:00 PM
Beautiful as always, reminds me of one of mine, everyday begins with you, maybe you would like it too
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Chris Green
Date: 3/9/2017 4:46:00 PM
Thanks again my friend. I will check your out in a bit.
Date: 3/9/2017 2:05:00 PM
Lovely !!!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/9/2017 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 3/9/2017 12:54:00 PM
So special, living in the moment of love :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/9/2017 2:47:00 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi.
Date: 3/9/2017 10:40:00 AM
Beautiful #7
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Chris Green
Date: 3/9/2017 2:47:00 PM
Thank you so very much Elizabeth.
Date: 3/9/2017 10:30:00 AM
Sigh and swoon; good morning to you! So sweetly penned, deserving a seven xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 3/9/2017 10:37:00 AM
Good morning Maureen. Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 3/9/2017 9:33:00 AM
an hour becomes an eternity when love finds its way to you, to all.. you charm with this enchanting read, chris... huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 3/9/2017 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
Date: 3/9/2017 9:18:00 AM
The beauty of embracing time though it slips away. Keeping love in focus! Lovely!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/9/2017 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 3/9/2017 7:27:00 AM
Top notch Chris and good morning to you.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/9/2017 10:36:00 AM
Thanks so much Phil. Good morning to you too.

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