Time Clock

What is time But the incessant tick tick ticking away Of the immediate Present

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/17/2023 11:55:00 AM

Hello Jim Slaughter, time moves on no matter what happens. Rnjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/19/2023 10:28:00 AM

Hello Jim, right you are. Enjoy your day my friend.

Jim Slaughter
Date: 3/17/2023 1:16:00 PM

There's no arguing with that, Darlene, thanks.

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/14/2023 12:01:00 PM

...and we are supposed to seize it...how so?! :)

Jim Slaughter
Date: 3/14/2023 12:50:00 PM

Carpe diem? I don't think that's possible, M. Time is like grains of sand...it just slips through your fingers.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/11/2023 10:53:00 AM

Great piece of writing; this subject needs a lot of attention. As compared to the billions of light years separating galaxies, we appear to be smaller than an angstrom. We have very little spare time to accomplish anything other than focus on staying alive.

Jim Slaughter
Date: 3/11/2023 12:46:00 PM

What's more important than that? Thanks, S P.

Constance La France

Date: 3/11/2023 10:35:00 AM

Jim, wonderful write, actually I have been giving this exact thing a lot of thought lately, in one click a thought, deed or experience is the past, so why we choose to hang on, blessings, Constance

Jim Slaughter
Date: 3/11/2023 10:41:00 AM

Thanks, Constance. I don't think there is a truly acceptable answer to your question. Probably because we can't do anything about either the past or the future, and have very little time to do anything except try to survive the present.