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Time Intrepid

The never ending journey It can take you anywhere Name it and you're there As two hearts melt into one It's an explosion of passion Seeping out to light the night Lusting hearts coming together Emotions held captive within Candles burning brightly now Shades of midnight blue Light up the purple skies Desperate hands touching Tender is the night we touch Lying within each other's arms A thousand eyes watching us As shadows fly across the sky Some are passed, some still survive Make my way down the chamber of love I hear such sweet moaning from above Hands touching flesh to flesh as The scent of us mingle in the air Flashes of the cosmos floating thru The infinite wisdom surrounding us I like it this way as we touch ~ yes This is the way I'd like us to stay You take me there where I want to be there is no time or space with us as Love's passions receive their message And we drift away on clouds of lust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2013 6:24:00 PM
Wow, that was intense. Awesome! I loved it! Nice job!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/12/2013 1:30:00 AM
Thank you Ashley.
Date: 2/18/2013 10:04:00 PM
oooh la la. a passionate one from you. SO NICE. This was a great one to discover!!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/18/2013 11:24:00 PM
Thank you Andrea ;}
Date: 2/18/2013 10:03:00 PM
oh good, there are older poems of yours I have not seen, so let me check out this one!!
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Date: 2/11/2013 2:38:00 AM
the heat of passion lasts awhile, enough until we get to smile, all entitled to our ration, for love comes into fashion, just maybe for the just ...
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/17/2013 6:43:00 PM
Thank you for reading Don ;}
Date: 11/27/2012 7:30:00 AM
Some times us guys are a bit dense, sorry things didn't work out. Fantastic poem though. You have skill relaying your passion with words. I liked your stars as eyes metaphor. Well done. One spelling error sent should be scent.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/27/2012 6:20:00 PM
Thank you Richard,,,, together 17 years ,,, so I have a lot of writing material ;} thanks for reading,,, have a great day ;}
Date: 10/25/2012 6:14:00 PM
Love sure is inspiring aye! Light & Love
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/25/2012 7:34:00 PM
This was written about my X ,, we were together for 17 years ,,,, nothing stays the same. thank you for reading Debbie ;}
Date: 10/23/2012 12:27:00 PM
Love under a midnight sky! fav. line~a thousand eyes watching us. Enjoyed greatly. :) Tanya
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/23/2012 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Tanya,,,, I wrote this with my X in mind. We were together " 17 " years, he wrote for me as well. we parted on good terms.
Date: 3/28/2012 8:03:00 PM
coming together with the blest, where angels float, with sweet caress, when you are not being a pest, timeless love you know it...
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/28/2012 8:12:00 PM
yup,,, timeless love ;} thank you for reading ;} I hope you are happy and smiling !
Date: 2/10/2012 9:56:00 AM
Wow this poem is so powerful. Brings out such amazing emotions. great job
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Date: 2/9/2012 2:55:00 PM
Quick! Call my doctor! My pacemaker just exploded! I like this poem muchissimo! Love, daver
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/11/2012 9:10:00 PM
I hear the doc coming now ;} thank you !
Date: 2/9/2012 2:18:00 AM
Debbie you written good,sweet and soft poem I enjoy it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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