Time

Time Baba baba black sheep Busy eating thyme Returning back to home Wasting lot of time Tom has his exam But busy drinking lime Or may be eating his yam Wasting lot of time Police caught a thief For he did a crime Robin is busy singing rhyme Did not get his food!! Wasting lot of time! All these who suffered Did not know what was time? Remember time is a prime!!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/7/2024 4:52:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Silent One

Date: 1/30/2018 10:20:00 AM

Interesting first post Shirin... Welcome to poetry soup..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/29/2018 2:37:00 PM

Shirin M., A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 1/29/2018 10:38:00 AM

A very nice written poem, you see time is a part of life, it just goes on and on and it s something we can t control or stop, how difficult it seems but it is life and pur time in this world is finish way before even we realize, welcome to poetrysoup and continue to write, good luck with your upcoming poems