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Time Time flies from sunrise past our sunset skies. Come morn, we all arise till night supplies a break when we surmise time sleeps to rise the newborn day implies restart time-wise. One-third of life denies time's valued prize; we sleep, but time defies to rest its eyes. April 26, 2017 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1217 Poetry Contest Note: On average, we sleep 8 hours during 24 hours, which is one-third of a day. Anyone 75 years old will have spent, on average, 25 years sleeping!

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/30/2017 7:53:00 PM

A 7 for this well-written WINNING poem, Sandra! I especially lie the last line. Janice

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2017 5:31:00 PM

Thank you, Janice, for the nice comment and rating! Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2017 5:02:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2017 5:30:00 PM

Thank you very much, Alexis! Hugs, Sandra

Joseph May

Date: 4/30/2017 4:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win Sandra

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2017 5:30:00 PM

Thank you very much, Joseph. Sandra

John Hamilton

Date: 4/30/2017 2:34:00 PM

Thanks Sandra, haven't seen you for a while, really nice entry, you can do a rhyme with more difficulty, and if you avoid repeating words (eg rise 3x)or sounds (plies2x) would place higher, but I enjoyed it all the same!

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2017 5:30:00 PM

Thank you for another fine contest, John! Sandra

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/29/2017 8:02:00 AM

This is so smooth-flowing and on a great subject, Sandra:) a 7:)

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2017 5:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jo. Hugs, Sandra

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/26/2017 8:44:00 PM

Your words are well chosen and convey their meaning well, allowing for a smooth flow of thoughts from line to line. Emile.

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/27/2017 6:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Emile, for such a supportive and uplifting comment! Sandra