Time

With deep regret
I do confess
time is a concept
I cannot grasp.

Decades offer ten
years as dates
to eagerly await
as individual friends.

It causes dismay
to see yesterday
fill tomorrow’s slate
and with mocking ways
consume dreams 
right off my plate.

I’ve seen time tick
on watch and clock.
I know the ticking
will not stop.

But couldn’t time pass,
as it does go,
and leave behind
more than just echo?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/5/2017 3:34:00 AM
oh for to feel the wonder without restraint. outside of time where all things are possible your words reflect so well our fragile life wonderful poem bless you
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:52:00 AM
A wonderful thoughtful poem, congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/8/2016 4:15:00 PM
I agree wholeheartedly, CayCay! Congrats on your placement with this relevant poem.
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Date: 7/7/2016 1:37:00 PM
CayCay, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
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Date: 9/6/2015 2:38:00 PM
Again, enjoy the observations and we all have questioned this man-made thing called time. Does it exsist or did we event it for organization? This poem worked. Fun rhyme!
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 9/7/2015 6:13:00 PM
ROGER THAT ONE!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/7/2015 10:40:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. Through the years, it has been difficult for me to make friends with time ... CayCay
Date: 8/23/2015 12:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poems today and thought about you, missing your son, as my son is visiting. Hope yours is not something permanent.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/23/2015 12:49:00 PM
Hey, Judy - Thanks for dropping by. For 28 years my special needs son, my heart, lived with me. For the past two he has been 2,000 miles away living with his Father. I can't deny him that, his version of leaving the nest and I can't deny missing him all the days! Enjoy your son. I'll check out your poems soon. Go in a good way ... CayCay
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