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Time

Time does simply fly passing clouds on it's way Dark or fluffy white below them life has say Even the likes of I, who I met, where I went Sporadic, or for a reason, I to there was sent It's where I went that matters, and who I went to meet For me it was a she of beauty, I'm swept from my feet She, this dark haired wonderment, I soon to greet Four days beside my side, gracing ones cities streets These days of happening past, two years on passing clouds If I were to show my heart, inside this Scotsman proud For in it time can't change, or ever to tear it apart If I had to go back to our together again, I'd joyously restart <*>
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February 11, 2014 at 8:35 PM
well done James,, . Hugs* SKAT
Mehta Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 6:42 AM
Inspiring thoughts to give up something to relive and congrats on the fine win, James
Maverick Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 3:27 PM
Very rich emotionly i find this James, am glad to have thought about looking you up, Wishing you inspiration and best of results..' Joe..)
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Romantic lines penned for a special lady..Enjoyed reading this one today..Soup Mail soon..Sara
Gopela Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 7:55 PM
Well-said, James! Bless you and take care! Your Souper-Friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
Mehta Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 5:02 AM
Lovely expressions on love and happiness
Chircop Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 12:06 AM
Holy moly...look who is back posting poetry..Im so happy you read my post awhile ago and more happy to read this beautiful poem just now.Don t be a stranger : )
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 7:52 PM
A beautifully written romantic poem assures to be written from the heart James. I loved it!
Bantawa Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 7:13 PM
a nice poem indeed.
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