Time

The Time is dying Mine is not . There is an umbilical cord Between my pulse and your watch -------- This Poem written by : Salman Dawood Mohammed Translated by : Laith Seher

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Bashar Darwish

Date: 9/13/2013 11:16:00 AM

Good on you laith Salman is a great poet.i think I've read most of the poems he has written up-to-date. He is smart in selecting the thoughts and capable in creating a unique poems, beside he has a wonderful spirit.

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2013 8:45:00 AM

Laith, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Laith Seher
Date: 9/12/2013 12:53:00 PM

Thank you dear friend , im really happy to hear that . I am a novelist ( I published my first novel in 2010 ) now I am a member in Iraqi writers union I am also a translator . my job is a teacher .

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/11/2013 6:18:00 AM

good morning Laith,, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Laith Seher
Date: 9/12/2013 12:55:00 PM

Thanks Linda . Nice to be your friend . im really happy to be here with you . kind regards

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/11/2013 4:21:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup,Laith. - - - Hope you will post your own poems. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Laith Seher
Date: 9/11/2013 4:34:00 AM

Thanks dear Anne , in fact i translated some Iraqi poems and posted them here . I wrote the names of the poets . Kind Regards.