Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

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Time

Time flows 
Sometimes slow
Sometimes fast.

Do you believe that?
Time flows regularly.
Like the pendulum 
Of a perfectly aligned
Old Large 19th Century 
Mahogany 8 Day Arch Dial 
Longcase Grandfather Clock.
Yet time is relative.

If you are happy
It seems to go fast
Like a sailing boat 
With winds that blows and drives
All sailing boats.

If you are sad then 
No wind blows.
The boat is stuck nowhere
In mid ocean
And worry erupts.


a poor scribble

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Zyrool Gifford June 9, 2025 at 10:27 AM Hello Victor, I enjoyed reading this piece, or as you say scribble it’s beautifully written and full of truths. Loved it. Have a great day, my friend.

Valsa George June 9, 2025 at 8:48 AM Yes, time is not uniform in its gliding. When happy, time moves so fast. When we are sad, it stands still. Minutes will seem eons! Yours is not a poor scribble, but a beautiful poem. Dear Victor, feel assured.

Anne Winter June 8, 2025 at 7:29 PM Dear Victor, this is not a poor scribble. You write brilliantly, please acknowledge that. I truly think that you write like a professional poet. This poem is genuinely genius. The metaphors and the imagery is particularly strong. I always enjoy reading your work. Best, Anne

CayCay Godwin June 8, 2025 at 2:44 PM Please delete poor scribble, it is a poor untruth! The last 2 stanzas are right on, adults (regrettably some kids) all feel those lines. The clock description caught my attention because of the 'delicious' details; you either have one, are well-versed on clocks or other(?) I've been off Soup for a good week. Nice to be here, with you, reading. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Joseph May June 8, 2025 at 5:35 AM Time moves slow or fast depending on the situation, Nicely penned

Sotto Poet June 7, 2025 at 5:22 PM Reading your beautiful poems, Victor, is a joy at any time. The poetry and the picture were both enjoyable to me.

Mystic Rose Rose June 7, 2025 at 4:42 PM Best be happy Victor for when we are sad, the time never seems to pass by

Jan Allison June 7, 2025 at 3:59 PM I think time passes faster the older we get Victor- never say its a poor scribble y friend! hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2025 at 3:59 PM Not poor at all I love poems about time. I do them all the TIME. Ha!!

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 7, 2025 at 2:46 PM It's always a great time to read your wonderful poetry, Victor. I enjoyed both the poem, and the picture. :)

Paula Goldsmith June 7, 2025 at 11:11 AM I think this is a wonderful "Time" write to read. Great Picture... I find time to be a funny thing. Why does it go faster the older we get??? Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away.......

Kim Rodrigues June 7, 2025 at 8:34 AM I still enjoy what you call a poor scribble! Loved seeing the 24 hour clock! I helped my sister with her business, off site, yesterday. Had so much fun. From 12:30-6:30 flew so fast!!

Sara Kendrick June 7, 2025 at 3:14 AM I would not want to be on that boat. Good work, Victor. I am glad that I picked this one to read today. Sara K

Beryl Edmonds June 7, 2025 at 1:51 AM A nice timely write Victor. I feel I’m stuck in time, wish it would go faster after my recent disaster. Beryl

Arthur Vaso June 7, 2025 at 12:43 AM Loved this, however for me time always seems to not only go fast but faster and faster! :)