Time

The stars in the sky
Don’t worry about lost time,
Nothing will last forever.

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Deb M

February 3, 2024 at 3:33 AM

Just lovely Brother Jerry…..oh to be a star sometimes!! Debx

Bill Baker

February 1, 2024 at 4:13 PM

Nice Haiku, Jerry. Stars do live a long time, so no need to hurry or worry. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Jerry Brotherton

February 1, 2024 at 6:18 PM

Even the fleeting moments we have, we don't have "Time" to waste worrying about it.

Silent One

February 1, 2024 at 12:11 PM

Very true... everything is temporary..

Jerry Brotherton

February 1, 2024 at 6:16 PM

So true. Thanks, Silent One for dropping by. I appreciate it.

Karen Jones

February 1, 2024 at 2:02 AM

Ah poignant and thought provoking! Time is indeed fleeting and precious and do we think about that too much?

Jerry Brotherton

February 1, 2024 at 6:15 PM

Isn't that the song by Doris Day? Que Sere Sera

Christina Bowring

January 31, 2024 at 11:54 PM

Love this profound, brilliant haiku dear Jerry. Read it several times. Really made me think and ponder upon. Sometimes, less really is more as in this case and so few words say so much. Your thoughtful haiku is exactly that so I’m faving it to read often. Thank you for sharing. Hope you are well. Hugs :)

Jerry Brotherton

February 1, 2024 at 6:04 PM

So appreciative of the fav. So happy it resonated so well with you. Have a blessed day my friend.

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