Time

The stars in the sky Don’t worry about lost time, Nothing will last forever.

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Deb M

Date: 2/3/2024 3:33:00 AM

Just lovely Brother Jerry…..oh to be a star sometimes!! Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 2/1/2024 4:13:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Jerry. Stars do live a long time, so no need to hurry or worry. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:18:00 PM

Even the fleeting moments we have, we don't have "Time" to waste worrying about it.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/1/2024 2:33:00 PM

loved it, absolutely loved your Haiku. I loved the timeless feel of your words...nicely done...enjoy your evening, Sara

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:16:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. You have a great evening as well.

Silent One

Date: 2/1/2024 12:11:00 PM

Very true... everything is temporary..

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:16:00 PM

So true. Thanks, Silent One for dropping by. I appreciate it.

Karen Jones

Date: 2/1/2024 2:02:00 AM

Ah poignant and thought provoking! Time is indeed fleeting and precious and do we think about that too much?

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:15:00 PM

Isn't that the song by Doris Day? Que Sere Sera

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/31/2024 11:54:00 PM

Love this profound, brilliant haiku dear Jerry. Read it several times. Really made me think and ponder upon. Sometimes, less really is more as in this case and so few words say so much. Your thoughtful haiku is exactly that so I’m faving it to read often. Thank you for sharing. Hope you are well. Hugs :)

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:04:00 PM

So appreciative of the fav. So happy it resonated so well with you. Have a blessed day my friend.