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Inspired by "Double Crossing Time" sung by Joe Bonamassa Some think they can cheat time. They’re crazy as can be. For in this world it’s only time practicing equality. The minutes and the hours in everybody’s day cannot be added or subtracted. Time you can’t betray. Perhaps you might extend it and even have long life, but death still comes and takes you, and life still brings you strife. Some might cut their own life short, but time goes on….. tick tock There is no kindness in the face of a ticking clock. I’ll just sit and sing the blues as time moves ever on. One day I will be here, but the next day I’ll be gone. May 28, 2023 For Joe Bonamassa British Blues Explosion Poetry Contest Sponsor: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 6/26/2023 5:24:00 AM
one of the lessons easily forgotten as we're dragged by days.. remember you write wisely on this multiple times dear Andrea :)
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Date: 6/21/2023 4:28:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win. God bless you, sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/20/2023 4:42:00 PM
Inspired but not copied. You created a thought provoking poem from a simple song. ( I liked your poem more than his song ) but dont tell any fans of his fans, that I said that.
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Date: 5/29/2023 6:19:00 PM
Andrea, I echo what Vijay said, your poem's final stanza encapsulates its very essence with remarkable precision, perfectly suited for the contest theme. My best wishes to you.
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Date: 5/29/2023 6:47:00 AM
The ending stanza spells the essence of your poem, Andrea. Aptly done for the contest theme. Best to you.
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Date: 5/29/2023 2:33:00 AM
Amazing writing. Love it! You are always surprising with your incredible verses. Love it!!! God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/29/2023 2:01:00 AM
Reminds me of the movie "Meet Joe Black". Great poem.
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Date: 5/28/2023 7:31:00 PM
True, some think they can cheat time but in time we will all be gone. Happy Memorial Day.
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