Time

Gone are the hands of the castrated clock, Now all that remains are the numbers to mock.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/28/2022 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kellie Anne. Such strong and powerful imagery - "castrated clock."

Ann Peck

Date: 2/24/2022 4:20:00 PM

That's so clever! I love it :)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/23/2022 9:12:00 AM

Very unusual and interesting couplet, very profound indeed! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. :)Paulette

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/22/2022 8:27:00 PM

I really love your unique entry Kellie. Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings xxoo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/22/2022 7:34:00 PM

Thought-provoking couplet, Kellie. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

L Milton Hankins

Date: 2/22/2022 6:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your spot in my contest, Kellie. Your couplet was probably the most unusual of all submitted. It really grabbed my attention. Thanks for entering my contest.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/19/2022 3:08:00 AM

But time marches on regardless Tom

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/14/2022 10:49:00 AM

Smart one, indeed! Aloha!