Time

Gone are the hands of the castrated clock,
Now all that remains are the numbers to mock.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your win Kellie Anne. Such strong and powerful imagery - "castrated clock."
Peck Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 4:20 PM
That's so clever! I love it :)
Calasibetta Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Very unusual and interesting couplet, very profound indeed! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. :)Paulette
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 8:27 PM
I really love your unique entry Kellie. Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings xxoo
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Thought-provoking couplet, Kellie. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Hankins Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:19 PM
Congratulations on your spot in my contest, Kellie. Your couplet was probably the most unusual of all submitted. It really grabbed my attention. Thanks for entering my contest.
Cunningham Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 3:08 AM
But time marches on regardless Tom
Leffanta Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 10:49 AM
Smart one, indeed! Aloha!
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