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Time

There's nothing quite like
              fond reflection in solitude

                As my thoughts swung
            like a pendulum from past
           to present not so long ago,
     I revisited various stages of my life.

                 I took time savoring 
              a cherished moment
          I wish I could recapture again.
               'Twas so precious when...

                  my better half and I
                     first exchanged
                        "I love you." 
                      Unforgettable!

                  So lost was I recalling 
            that special, romantic moment
       the world around me ceased to exist;
  it came to a standstill! So deep in reverie...

        I heard not the sounds of infinite
          ticking of the clock on the wall.
           A moment that will forever hold
            an eternal place in my heart

               There's nothing quite like
               fond reflection in solitude



Time- 8 Word Challenge Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: A Dear Heart 
Date written: 07/01/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 4:41 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my time contest, wonderful writing and I love your image too _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Oh wow! I don't think I've seen you not use your pseudonym, Constance:-) I like it! Thank you so much for my placement! Most obliged.
Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Subtle reflections with such deep emotions my friend. This is wonderfully penned. Congratulations on your win Edward :) Blessings!
Somadas Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 1:47 AM
fond reflection in solitude.. Beautifully penned Edward.. Congrats on your wonderful win..
Ibeh Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Thank you so much, Jenish;-)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 9:54 AM
A beautiful moment in time to reflect upon with romantic heart, Edward. I also love the hourglass shape. GL in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Ibeh Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 11:33 AM
Thank you so much, Rhonda:-) Blessings to you, my friend!
Warrior Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 10:16 AM
Nice entry my friend...best wishes...god bless...^WW^ :o)
Ibeh Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Thank you so much, Wingster:-) I appreciate the visit, my friend!
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