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As we travel the road, of the future to come, winding, and rocky, back to where we're from. Many a trial, and many a test, will weed out the mistakes, so one can be their best. Torment, and tears, one is bound to endure, just a reality, this is almost for sure. Control for some, is their way of life, until their captive, sees the light. Then, and only then, will one truly know, the reason for this journey, as time will always show.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/28/2008 9:20:00 PM
a great read and a wonderful piece of poetry really enjoyed it.
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Date: 8/28/2008 1:14:00 PM
yes i like this write and ihave to agree with everone else that this it has a good flow and gentle to the ear well done thank you for your comments on my poems they are welcome God bless
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Date: 8/27/2008 3:13:00 PM
Christy - It is sad that people are like that in this life - Great write - God Bless
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Date: 8/26/2008 3:34:00 PM
Wonderful flow, it falls very gently on the ear. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/26/2008 5:00:00 AM
Christy, this is a xvery good write. The words rhyme perfectly with a smooth flow and the topic is detailed precisely with the clearest of imagery. Very well written. Michael
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