Time

Sometimes, the air is too muggy-
it's hard to catch your breath
you trip as you run up the stairs-
too fast
too much 
too soon

it's life.

It doesn't slow down, 
pause or give you room to breath

Man's construct of time is treacherous-
it eats away at the inevitable-
it rushes you to fulfill your destiny
by pressuring you to obtain societies' duties-

which are also man-made
a construction of our world-
manipulation at its finest-

what happened to our youth?
When time lasted,
Moments were cherished and continuous-
then sometime around adolescence, 
we lost the joy of life 
and instead, focus on time's constraints

soon everything is measured by time,
all is constructed according to our linear understanding
we don't fully live in the moment-
rather expecting and anticipating the next moment

this leaves us all;
living in the future-
stuck, frustrated with time's pressures

How could man create such a thing
that destroys our pure existence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/1/2018 1:20:00 PM
On the mark Sarah, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Sarah Casey
Date: 1/11/2019 11:43:00 AM
Thanks so much :)
Date: 6/1/2018 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Sarah. Fascinating subject, time. Something we all take for granted until we have just about used it all up. Well written!
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Date: 6/1/2018 12:03:00 PM
Thank you very much Daniel! Appreciate the kind words
Date: 6/1/2018 8:03:00 AM
Congrats on POTD... Time is something that waits for no one nor cares for who they are...
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Date: 6/1/2018 12:03:00 PM
Thank you Silent one xx
Date: 6/1/2018 7:22:00 AM
So well done, Sarah, society breeds the joy out of life by forcing us to pursue "important things" ($, stuff, fame...) at the cost of our souls. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 6/1/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thank you. That is extremely well said and exactly what I was going for!
Date: 6/1/2018 6:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Sarah :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/1/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 6/1/2018 3:29:00 AM
Time...the healer of all wounds...and destroyer of worlds...superbly done my friend...Congrats on your POTD!!!...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/31/2018 1:54:00 PM
Yet, many humans still take time for granted. Powerfully thought-provoking!
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Sarah Casey
Date: 5/31/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Drake! Appreciate it truly
Date: 5/31/2018 1:43:00 PM
Wow this is great Sarah! I am saving it as a favorite. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 5/31/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind comment Heidi, I appreciate it and very happy to hear it's among your favourites. xox
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