Time

Sometimes, the air is too muggy-
it's hard to catch your breath
you trip as you run up the stairs-
too fast
too much 
too soon

it's life.

It doesn't slow down, 
pause or give you room to breath

Man's construct of time is treacherous-
it eats away at the inevitable-
it rushes you to fulfill your destiny
by pressuring you to obtain societies' duties-

which are also man-made
a construction of our world-
manipulation at its finest-

what happened to our youth?
When time lasted,
Moments were cherished and continuous-
then sometime around adolescence, 
we lost the joy of life 
and instead, focus on time's constraints

soon everything is measured by time,
all is constructed according to our linear understanding
we don't fully live in the moment-
rather expecting and anticipating the next moment

this leaves us all;
living in the future-
stuck, frustrated with time's pressures

How could man create such a thing
that destroys our pure existence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Smith Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 1:20 PM
On the mark Sarah, congratulations for POTD honors...
Casey Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Thanks so much :)
Turner Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations on POTD Sarah. Fascinating subject, time. Something we all take for granted until we have just about used it all up. Well written!
Casey Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 12:03 PM
Thank you very much Daniel! Appreciate the kind words
One Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Congrats on POTD... Time is something that waits for no one nor cares for who they are...
Casey Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 12:03 PM
Thank you Silent one xx
Capitano Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 7:22 AM
So well done, Sarah, society breeds the joy out of life by forcing us to pursue "important things" ($, stuff, fame...) at the cost of our souls. Congrats on POTD.
Casey Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Thank you. That is extremely well said and exactly what I was going for!
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 6:44 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Sarah :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Casey Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Warrior Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 3:29 AM
Time...the healer of all wounds...and destroyer of worlds...superbly done my friend...Congrats on your POTD!!!...love and light...^WW^
Tacito Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Yet, many humans still take time for granted. Powerfully thought-provoking!
Casey Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Drake! Appreciate it truly
Sands Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Wow this is great Sarah! I am saving it as a favorite. Thanks for sharing :)
Casey Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Thank you very much for your kind comment Heidi, I appreciate it and very happy to hear it's among your favourites. xox
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