Time-Worn Barlett Pear

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Those pears grew in clusters this year..There was a plentiful supply..Sad that I can no longer perserve them..

. Time-worn Barlett Pear Orange leaves dance with the wind... Clumsily fruit falls

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 2:58:00 PM

Maybe it had grown rotten on the tree? Poor pear!! Interesting you saw those vultures so close by! They creep me out a little.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/12/2011 1:55:00 PM

Like the image you have portrayed with this write Sara. I love pear jam so it would not be falling. love phyl

Daver Austin

Date: 11/10/2011 3:31:00 PM

Is the Bartlett Pear symbolic? I can think of a number of images, some fruit, some human. Good thought provoking Haiku. Love, daver